Whirlguy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Upstairs]

Kingbastard video?! Wow!

THis is one of the best music videos I have seen on newgrounds. First Id like to day that I love kingbastard's music. I find it great to see a movie to one of his songs, althought its an oldschool one, but I love his oldschool songs(: I had seen a preview of this movie because you linked kingbastard in the forums to your work. I clicked it and saw it, it was still the beginning. This grew out to something nice. Not everything is looking great, but it has a good style and is nice to look at. Music and Animation play great together, and the ending brought up emotions in me. You sir, did a great job!
GR: 8 looks great, a bit strange. And some things just didnt look right.
ST: 10 You have a very own and cool style which gets a 10 from me.
SO: 10 As I said, animation and music play awesome together, and thats why I give you a 10 once more.
VI: 0 and you know why.
IN: 4 play button is enough
HU: 2 because of those little creatures, they give you a smile upon yoru face
OV: 9 I love your style serious. Only work on your animation skills, parts like the water drops, the hands, and when the guy got off the bed couldve had some more work.I however loved the way all the color went everywhere. This gets a 9 from me in overal.

[SOAD - Cigaro]

Told you!

I told you you should atleast get an award for this! And look at this, today's feature! Awesomeness jesse! i love this video(:
GR 9: le good
ST 10: le awesomeness
SO 9: teh omg yesh
VI 5: omg shroomman strikes again
IN 4: youve got than just a playbutton...
HU 7: was good
OV 10: You should have more faith in your movies jesse(:

jessejayjones responds:

Yay! :D Thank you ^^

[De Filmpiegang 2]

Nice..

Ah, Dutch people. I wouldnt like using my own voiceacting in a movie of mine, because it has a dutch accent to it. You did anyway, and i have to say that it was well done. The animation couldve been better but werent the worst either. Good job.
GR: 6, Graphics were ok. Id work on them if i were you.
ST: 6, The style is old but ok. I dont like it so much myself.
SO: 7, Background songs would have helped
VI: 0, Nope, but that has nothing to do with it.
IN: 2, Playbutton... check
HU: 5, Jokes were a bit old.
OV: 6, A bit more work and a bit more thought can make this a nice piece of flash. The more you work on flash, the better you get. So dont stop making movies.

Filmpiegang responds:

Thanks that was really, really helpful!
I know that the graphics and the style are very simple and I'm thinking of changing the style in the next episode. Lately I have been doing alot of anime and manga tutorials, just to get better at frame by frame. I will put alot more effort in the next episode especially on the graphics cause I want to show you guys that I can do better! And because I got daily sixth and that really pissed me off lol. Thanks again for the review dude!

[The Father's tale]

A weird series..

Weird series youre making man, very random but still very serious. With some influences from David Firth and LiveCorpse.
GR: 6, werent too great. A little practise wont do any bad:P
ST: 8, the concept was pretty weird, but so are livecorpse's and Firth's
SO: 10, im such a dick giving it a 10 because its mine, but i apreciate that you used music so thatnks(:
VI: 4 ooh hes gonna hang himselfO_o
IN: 3, play and replay, check..
Hu: 0, but thats ok.
Ov: 7, Nice movie, nice concept. But a little work on the graphics would be good.

[Fear and Loathing Collab]

It has been submit yay!!

Finally yeah, your movie was good jesse, i was kinda confused with the other flash tho heheh

[Polkamon]

Pokemon Goodness!

I downloaded this song a very long while ago. I at first didn't recognize it, but then i did:) I usually don't like sprite movies, but this one was enjoyable:P Good job there, my day was fcked already, but this made it ok. I have one hint. When youre moving your sprites to a position on the screen, hold "x" to move the subject one pixel far(handy for spritemovies). When you hold "shift" with "x" it moves further, but still in pixel ammounts. Try that, it will become handy in further spritemovies. Good luck!

iisryan responds:

Thanks for the tip. I'll keep that in mind in the future ;) I generally don't work with sprites, but they're always fun if I need something quick to work on.

[Rush 2 ++]

That was awesome vinneh!!1

Altho i saw your preview, i didnt know this was going to be a competition. I loved the Characters you all made up yourself. I dont know how you made up so many, but theyre cool. Those random parts were funny(if they were random), a guy sticking out his toungue, while eating heheheh. the fights were cool, and the music is one of things i like alot of your movies, an introduction to a song we dont know with an awesome movie in the background, or the other way round. Well, anyway...
GR 10: Because you always make what im trying to achieve(not stealing your style, but becoming just as good with fbf work)
ST 10: I love your style, all those characters, the surroundings, and always different music.
SO 8: Yeah, picking music nobody knows is cool, but it wasnt the best:P
VI 6: There was some violence, not the whole movie was, and there was no blood
IN 3: YAY play button! and replay yay!
HU 6 : Humour wasnt great, but it was cool:)
OVERAL 9: Ive seen better works of you, altho i know you did your best on this, and this is very impressive:)

[Tears of Red]

I love movies like these

First of all, i like that song ALOT, every time i hear it it toutches me again. I think you did a pretty good job on this. The part i liked the most was the fight. Because the animations were the best there, the movie will get more realistic if it looks realer, so if i were you id work alittle more on that. I saw this part at the end, where he was wearing the scarf and his head looked alittle weird, and the animation of him walking away was a little weird too.. you shouldve made a walk animation and fade in and out that. that wouldve looked alot better.. anyway
Gr 7: the way how the leafs fell, and the scarfthing, that was a little weird.. also you shouldve used more backgrounds.
St 8: I like Anime, and the naruto music, and the sad feeling in it. It's poetic.
So 10: As i said, i love this song
Vi 5: THere wasnt so much gore, just a stab heheh.
In 2: play button... check
Hu 0: why do you think?
OVERAL 8: The idea is good, but work on somen things.

immortaltechnique responds:

thanks :D i'll try get better the next time around :D
take it care
thanks for the review!

[Le Pomme De TerreGarcon]

omfg yesh

omg yesh^^ its teh omg liek omg teh yesh and teh music is teh yesh and teh story is teh yesh its all teh omfg yesh. OPFG YESH!!!!1^^

wallpaperman responds:

omg yesh

[LaLaLa]

you're talented

Good movie, made me laugh the kabouter plop thing. Are you dutch or belgium? i really like the style youre making your movies with. Theres alot of humour in it too, and i like fbf stuff. The fact that youre a girl is the most coolest, i dont see alot of girls on newgrounds which are good with flash. if you want to know how good i am, watch sword of worldbounds ep.1 Id like to coöperate with you sometime. Youre in my favourites now:) please respond to this review and tell me if youd like to do that. Im on a holiday for a week so ill see if you have responded. Youre talented

- Whirlguy