Whirlguy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Face Melt Syndrome]

"Knock You Out"? heheh

I rememember me doing a song like this a while ago, drum and bass and rock, very different from this tho... I didnt think the piano was out of place, it gave a piece like this a calm feeling with it, and i actually liked that:) It's nice to put alot of styles together. There was nothing wrong with this to me.
Or 10: its original to put alot of styles together
Di 9: why would that be?
Cl 10: and this?
Ef 9: it sounds like you put alot of effort in it, but it was so little short
Ov 9: yeah it was good but so short...

- Whirlguy

[The Legend Of Zelda (ReMiX)]

stolen?

i found this on lime-wire long ago man, why would someone put it on there first and THEN put it on ng? thats not smart... i believe you just stole it and put it on here telling it was yours.. but i dont believe you and answer me please...

Scorpion132 responds:

I dont know wtf your talking about, I just remixed it. its not stolen its a remix!

[ThE>?>?>?CRazY:(:)SoNG}]{;-__-]

youre such fools...

i remember reviewing teddyrob because of his awefull song(s). So this is his band eh? pretty good to me. but still, i was just clicking this link because this looked like spam. SO JUST DONT CALL SONGS LIKE THIS ANYMORE AND THINK OF A NICE NAME. cant be that hard right? please take my advise...
0: why? because the name of the song goes with originality.
8: there was pretty much diversity.
4: clarity of the mic was very bad, try to work on that if you can!
9: i dont play guitar but those riffs sure sound difficult to play.
6: nice song, but quality lacks alot.

- whirlguy

RndTBWBExtr responds:

ok, listen, TeddyRob is a name for just me not anyone else. RndTBWBextr is a name for me and all of my cousins to submit songs that we hardly even try on. besides if i made the song in like five minutes i could care less about it or what the name of it was. i didnt think think that people would review it and say they liked it, im so used to getting flamed all the time so i dont care about all those stupid little details like clarity of the mice. and by the way, how did u give a zero for originality, i didnt steal this. honestly do you think u heard this song on the readio before or somewhere else? but why do i care what you think ur just some random 15 year old from the netherlands with no life sitting at his computer all day. kind of explains why u have 3,130 experience points, 130 written reviews available, 49 songs in the audio portal,10 flash movies in the flash portal.Man you need to shut the fuck up and get a life.

Thanks for the informative review,
Teddy

[RGH: Swing Low (Bewildere]

omg review! w00t

ok, i started the song and i was like...O_O is this really ryeguyhead? ok so i never heared an organ in your song. these drums came in and it got a little more ryeguyheadlike with those synths. all nice and stuff but it made me feel you were messing with instruments too much not knowing what you were doing, and ended up like this, thats kind of a pitty... now theres a cool synth in it, but there was one thing i wouldve done different there. i wouldve made the same drums but without that reverb, or a different kind of reverb, because it doesnt match the synths. anyway, my ratings:
10: i dont know what you were doing but i still never heared something like this indeed:P
7: the buildups of your songs all get a little the same, beginning-chorus-couplet-chorus-solo-ending. its good, but it seems you dont try to just let it go its own way. its like you always use the same pattern. but anyway, you made some more detailed diversity anyway so it was good:)
8: uhm yeah
8: i cant really tell the effort but ill give it an 8
7: i think you couldve done better;)

RyeGuyHead responds:

I wasn't messing with instruments. I had a little synth jam that I came up with and just put it into fruity loops. That was the first little organ part in the beginning. Then i realized that I had nothing else worthwhile to put into the song. So i just mixed things around and added some badd ass drums. In fact, when I first saved it, it was called, "Where am I going" I will try and be more creative in my buildup, I understand what you are saying.

[Hyrule Minish Cap]

unsure

good remix but work on the samples. Music is not just placing notes. And this better not be a midirip:)
6:never heared this song being remixed before, but its still zelda
8:its an exact copy, just the use of intruments wasnt very right.
6: some instruments were too loud compared with others.
5: it sounds like a midi-rip, but if it wasnt, you still shouldve put more effort in the instruments.

i give you a 6 because i dont know, but i enjoyed recognizing the song:)

- Whirlguy

TheGimpsta responds:

I'm sorry, it is an midi rip...*slaps self in face* but it sounds cool right? lol. Thanks for the review.

[++Q++]

give it a chance

the main instrument is an "E-Piano"(or something) right? YES IT IS! I used to use fruity loops 3, and i can remember me using this sample(although i didnt want to use it too much). Meh, this didnt really deserved 5th place, and this is why.

Ok, every artist needs his attention, but something tells me youre not taking your job in the audio portal serious. Every artist wants to be known. But i didnt know with this. lame beat, simple samples, but nice chords. These things always make me glad i got problems with posting my music when i was younger. heheh, although i found better samples than you did those days.

4: There was no thought of the beats and samples
10: there was some devirsity.
4: the compositions werent right, the epiano sounds very anoying.
7: i gave it a 7, because i heared some stuff where definitely was thought in.

I think the best, you can take your time and make a come back. If you practise, you might become a good artist on ng. If you want to^^

- Whirlguy

[Psychosis Makina]

Evil

A bit Metroid Like, not alot to me. I like the drums, its a hard task finding good drumsamples when youre on fl. Since i met Chronamut ive learned alot. I think ive improved alot since then. Why am i always talking about other things... Im getting a head of myself.

Okok, Nice intro. Really evil and Industrial. Love the evil flow pushes. Nice drums as i said. After listening it twice i get to see the metroid part. Its not one of those wild parts to me. Its more the easy sounding part between... It sounds so evil yet calm, like you dont know what will happen.

Some synths dont really sound nice to this song to me. Theres an easy part which doesnt sound really nice to me. it has this more uplifting parts in it. They shouldve been muffled more, there shouldve been a big reverb in it, or you shouldve lowered the volume. Something to hide the image it had. I wouldve that if i were you but hey, you are the artist^^

- Whirlguy

ShinDenjin responds:

coolage, I'll take that into consideration. thanks.

[Rucklo - BeatingUp The Weakest]

Nice for an Action Movie on ng

I feel for making music these days:P Its all a mix of all im capable of. But meh, back to the song. AS my title said, really nice for an action movie. Im talking of a serious one, like on tv shows. Cartoon, and if not possible real movie. Serious:)

The strings were muffled, why am i telling this? well they were very nice with this track. A certain someone on ng who is really good with progressions, is trying to redo this with better progressions(was this a secret?). Ive heared a bit of that. And much respect for his knowledge of progresions and stuff, but i liked the strings in this one more because they just fit.

And Monkeybullman his review said:"but i think the string melody is a little weak and needs to be louder and u should maybe try adding a high melody line to give the trk some direction." I;m not really agreeing with this. If you ever think of editing this, and youa dd voices. It would be the best as you have it now. If you ever come to know someone who would like to do that for you, get pen, paper, write a text and dont skip your chance!

"Well, I´m not totally satisfied with the mastering... I might add vox and re-master." sometimes coincidences just turn out good^^

- Whirlguy

Rucklo responds:

No secret the good Chronamut made some changes to the song, he made it more spacey and I personally feel more for my version :P
Might be cause i´ve a goal with the song, and it aint what he made it. His version still sounds pretty cool though...
About the strings, I mentioned all that stuff when relying to mbm, i still have that opinion :D
I hope to get vox on it ;)

Thanx alot for your time man! I´m glad u liked the song :D

/Rucklo

[Golden Comet]

missing...

I like this song alot, theres just missing something, and i know what. A BIG sawy BASS!!!^^ Fruity loops, you hear that right away. But its a good song. I like the explosion, if youre ever going to make a second version of it. PUT IN A BASS! cool song man!

PERVOK responds:

thanxs, but i cant really remake it. my computer got its harddrive cleared off after i made this song so...i woould have to entirely remake it. and im a lazy bastard. sry

[Vengeful Spirits]

Im Wondering

I hear alot of Ejay stuff in it, yes ive used it. Its the program i began with. When i still was on the musicschool i told it to the teatcher, and thats how i got fruity loops. But enough about me. I hear some Ejay sounds in it, and they are cool, but some dont sound like Ejay stuff, maybe because i had a demo i dont know them... I dont really appreciate music which is built up out of stuff you didnt make yourself, fruity loops is an exception because you make the song yourself than. I hope you make up your mind sometime and make real own music. Luck in you musicfuture:P

- Whirlguy