I Got The Cake! :3
Haha, I never thought anyone would actually go and make a game about this! In my opinion it would have been way too hard to make it work as an interactive one-level-game with multiple solutions such as in the thread, where this originated. I see you've decided to create more levels.
Some things you could work on:
- Add a preloader, you can download them from newgrounds if you don't know how to make them.
- It's a short game, but the loading takes pretty long. Lowering the audio quality in flash could solve this.
- The graphics of this game could improve in lots of ways. The levels look weird and out of shape, there are pieces of text everywhere but it looks messy and out of place, objects are moving when they shouldn't be, certain animations don't look too smooth and most of the drawn objects don't look that good either. The cake looks pretty decent though. Be sure to make drawings into symbols, and use layers.
- The gameplay is strange aswell. Sometimes it is very hard to figure out where to click to get anywhere.
- There is no play button, the game starts right as it has loaded. There is no replay button either. I recommend putting those in your game.
Your game making skills aren't bad. In fact, it looks as if you don't quite know how all the drawing tools work, but you made sure the scripting was fine, and that's a good thing. I do highly recommend to improve your drawingskills though.