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I Got The Cake! :3

Haha, I never thought anyone would actually go and make a game about this! In my opinion it would have been way too hard to make it work as an interactive one-level-game with multiple solutions such as in the thread, where this originated. I see you've decided to create more levels.

Some things you could work on:
- Add a preloader, you can download them from newgrounds if you don't know how to make them.
- It's a short game, but the loading takes pretty long. Lowering the audio quality in flash could solve this.
- The graphics of this game could improve in lots of ways. The levels look weird and out of shape, there are pieces of text everywhere but it looks messy and out of place, objects are moving when they shouldn't be, certain animations don't look too smooth and most of the drawn objects don't look that good either. The cake looks pretty decent though. Be sure to make drawings into symbols, and use layers.
- The gameplay is strange aswell. Sometimes it is very hard to figure out where to click to get anywhere.
- There is no play button, the game starts right as it has loaded. There is no replay button either. I recommend putting those in your game.

Your game making skills aren't bad. In fact, it looks as if you don't quite know how all the drawing tools work, but you made sure the scripting was fine, and that's a good thing. I do highly recommend to improve your drawingskills though.

teammember responds:

i can make a one level multi choice also, just as hard as it was to make this one. maybe easier

i just dont want to

har har =D

Hey pat! I just finished playing the game and it was awesome! I never expected an ending like that with hard mode lol!

This game had the best graphics so far in this series. The music is happy and trancy like always. And there are some changes in the gameplay. Like in mapmode the randomizer had been edited, you'll play 2 games that are automaticly randomized, before hopping to a new spot on the map. The map is smaller because of this, and the game seems really short. But aw well, you can always play it again! =D

Godlimations responds:

hey dude! You're not online anymore, we have to talk more fruity!!! :D I miss those days. keep in touch buddy, thanks for the support bigtime man!

goeie flash!!!

ik dacht laat ik maar een review geven want deze moet ik onthouden. Je doet het goed man! mensen moeten leren geen crap maken. Mijn neef heeft er veel van geleerd hij maakte een explosie en ik kan je vertellen dat ie er vet uitzag.

GAMECUBICLE responds:

Bedankt man! Btw.. ik heb je in AIM en MSN toegevoegd (doe ik altijd met Nederlandse NG'ers) dus... Talkto you later!

Hmm...

You could atleast tell everyone there's a button in the timeline which shows 2 frames back and forward. It makes it a lot more easier for people. Btw, people need to know about actionscript. Since you know how to make a button, you can explain people how to do that. Me for example, want to know how to make a button to another page and a button to return. Couldn't you make a tutorial like that!?

McSqueeb responds:

Sure, I'll make a button tutorial for ya. Took me ages to figure out Flash 2004 action script and the whole time I was wishing someone would just tell me. I figure it out finally 2 weeks ago and now I'm getting into the interactive side of flash.

I guess i should remember this one...

itr looked great but i didnt see the whole tutorial. I guess its good: You gave this entry a 5, raising its score to 3.85!
heh...

DJRunaway responds:

:D :) THANKS MATE :D Thanks for the 10 and the 5 :)

3 words!!!

I LOVE TUTORIALS!!!

bumcheekcity responds:

Well, i'm your favourite NG user. I've got another int he pipeline.

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