Whirlguy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-=LJC=- She fed me the lotus]

Wow cool

This song has a laid back start. Cool beats with bits and bops. Breakdowns everywhere. Some voice later on. This is the kind of experimental song with cool beats and without any solid musical motives.
OR: 7, Im getting used to hearing this type of music in ng these days(:
DI: 10, Just as I said, a song without any solid motives. Everything you hear is different, nothing is repeated.
CL: 10, yeah clarity is really good!
EF: 10, It takes lots of effort to make a song like this(:
OV: 9, a cool song! But I would hope for more to happen. Not really in the melodic sense though. Maybe some things to add like.. more pads, or windchimes. More of a moodsetting^-^

LJCoffee responds:

Nice summary - "no solid musical motives" is a very fair statement.

I like the idea of something that's not really all that traditionally "musical" being able to be appreciated the same way though.

If you're hearing a lot of this on NG latley then maybe that's a good sign for me - perhaps one of these days, I'll wake up and find that the crap I'm putting together is marketable :)

Thanks!

[_-={Lacrioso's Breeze}=-_]

aww

Wow this is so gentle and calming I love it! So soothing and sweet and childish(: This is great quality music! Great for flashmovies!
OR: 10, I dont hear this kind of music alot on ng! I wished I would(:
DI: 10, I love big compositions, full of diversity, like this one.
CL: 10, Awesome quality!
EF: 10, Oh yeah, nothing but effort!
OV: 10, straight tens! Awesome(:

MaestroRage responds:

:D

Thank you for the review, I am glad you liked this piece! If you liked this one, be sure to check out Lacrioso as well. This is his strength! I merely burrowed off his mental energies for this piece!

Once again, thank you for the review, I am glad you liked it ^^.

[- Moving Up - Collab]

Cool stuff!

This song has a great build up. The beats are awesome and so are all the instruments playing in it. Really cool hiphop!
OR: 7, Yeah its cool(:
DI: 7, Well, most of the hiphop genre itsself isnt that great at diversity, but other than that you did a great job at it!
CL: 10, great quality hiphop!
EF: 10, Yes the effort was good!
OV: 9, I think Id give it a nine. Great quality Hiphop(:

Greeksta-69 responds:

thanks man this is cool why u explained everything thanks we respect that, thanks for the review and hope to hear more reviews like this in the future.

[Awakening of Crepth]

Hi

Cool song! Very well composed! You could use a compressor to get rid of the fuzz in it though^-^
OR: 7, I really like the song, although the samples sound a little fruityloops-like.
DI: 8, Pretty good job on the diversity!
CL: 4, Id say you have to get rid of the fuzzes, the quality really lacks because of it.
EF: 7, The song lacks in quality, but the rest is pretty good.
OV: 7, If I were you Id work on the compression of the song(: Furthermore this song is fun to listen to^-^

Neon-Crepth responds:

thank you for the review, i appriciate your critisism. i didn't quite get the sample thing at first but i get what you mean. Thanks about the diversity, i didn't notice the scratchyness until it became mp3, is it supposed to be like that? ill work harder on the mastering.

thx again, ttyl.

-crepth

[RGH: Yea, you told me]

yar

Lol Im stupid, why didnt I do that in the first place? Oh and you dont suck at all! =D

This song is really experimental! Spacy Experimental. I didnt really expect anything like this. You used some really cool sounds, it all fits together great. The robotic voice in the background makes it complete. This would be awesome for flash.
OR: 10, yesir, Ive heard experimental stuff of yours, but this is just a tad more experimental, and I love this one best of those so far(:
DI: 9, A nice little loop!
CL: 9, Clean^-^
EF: 8, Great work! Awesome work on the samples!
OV: 10, Thats amazingly experimental Rye (:

RyeGuyHead responds:

Had to do something different

[(_RGH_) Pico Crossing(mixalot)]

yay for pico 07

lol I accidentally reviewed an old song of yoursO_o

Ok since your newest song wont seem to play for me Ill review this one. Great work on the drums, I love the phaser in there. The bass is really loud, maybe a little too. You set a really good mood in this song, its really playful. Lovely loop!
OR: 10, A Newgrounds based song, yes thats very cool!
DI: 10, yes you did it again!
CL: 8, maybe a BIT too much bass lol
EF: 9, Sweet job at setting the mood man!
OV: 9, W00T!!! ALL MY 5 R BELONG TO THIS!
lol

RyeGuyHead responds:

Bass must be strong like bull

DONT BE AFAID TO DOWNLOAD YEA YOU TOLD ME, it doesnt stream

I suck

[i'm a peach]

Lovely

The beginning sounds pretty basic, but once the transition gets there it sounds really good! I love how everything sounds so.. playful! Experimental.. the synths, the beats. Everything really^-^ It just never seems to stop either, great! Its also a bit childish at parts. Great work on that! And a great way to end this song
OR: 8, Bashing beats, bass and synths with a childish atmosphere. Reminds me of Kingbastard's old stuff.
DI: 10, great work on that!
CL: 8, not really much to say here.
EF: 10, Sounds like a great ammount of effort went in here!
OV: 9, A great song^-^

snoballandthmonyshot responds:

nice1,
a few hours worth of me and waga taking turns messing around with fruity poops, was fun.
;ped

[Warp In]

Hello again

I see my last review made you angry and Im sorry for that. I write reviews only to give tips on how to do better, not to blam someones ass off. Maybe I should have written more about what was good about the song. In case my last review made you angry: Im sorry, that wasnt supposed to happen. I could hear that there was alot of work to get the sounds that way.

I didnt listen to this song but Ill give you full tens.

Syntrus responds:

heh thx

[Ankle Breaker]

Nice song you got there

starts of with 8-bit sounds a loud bass. Interests me right away, very catchy! I see you want help on where to improve this song? Well.. You could change the bassline instead of adding new layers of melody. Or you could pitch up an octave. Add some background effects maybe, or give it some breakbeats. I think best would be to change chords though^-^
OR: 9, I dont recall hearing an 8-bit like song like this of yours.
DI: 7, Usually you work hard on this. There still was alot of diversity, but not in the way to keep it interesting. So.. I recommend adding new chords.
CL: 9, Some nice stuff for my speakers^-^
EF: 7, Good job, but I know you can do better
OV: 7, I hope youll finish this song, I really like it! =D

RyeGuyHead responds:

maybe ill turn it into a midi and reasonize it

[Exactly]

I like it

Cool use of samples and build up, but while listening I got the feeling it was looping over and over. Great song although I had hoped for something more. A little repetitive too. But good though. Maybe its the drums, yes I think it is.
OR: 9, A song based on.. a saying.. XD
DI: 6, Great song, but even better with more diversity^-^
CL: 10, Yes, great clarity!
EF: 7, It sounds like you loop your melodies over and over and barely add anything to keep it interesting. Thats a pitty, I hope youll work on that^-^
OV: 7, I like it(:

Syntrus responds:

EF: 7, It sounds like you loop your melodies over and over and barely add anything to keep it interesting. Thats a pitty, I hope youll work on that^-^

Well what the fuck do you do make it so it has no consistancy? I bet you your one of those basterds who make a song with about a million variations random techno with no flow makes no sense to me and it took more effort then you think man. Thanks for the reiview. And all i have to say is this EXACTLY >:{