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Cool stuff!

This song has a great build up. The beats are awesome and so are all the instruments playing in it. Really cool hiphop!
OR: 7, Yeah its cool(:
DI: 7, Well, most of the hiphop genre itsself isnt that great at diversity, but other than that you did a great job at it!
CL: 10, great quality hiphop!
EF: 10, Yes the effort was good!
OV: 9, I think Id give it a nine. Great quality Hiphop(:

Greeksta-69 responds:

thanks man this is cool why u explained everything thanks we respect that, thanks for the review and hope to hear more reviews like this in the future.

Hi

Cool song! Very well composed! You could use a compressor to get rid of the fuzz in it though^-^
OR: 7, I really like the song, although the samples sound a little fruityloops-like.
DI: 8, Pretty good job on the diversity!
CL: 4, Id say you have to get rid of the fuzzes, the quality really lacks because of it.
EF: 7, The song lacks in quality, but the rest is pretty good.
OV: 7, If I were you Id work on the compression of the song(: Furthermore this song is fun to listen to^-^

Neon-Crepth responds:

thank you for the review, i appriciate your critisism. i didn't quite get the sample thing at first but i get what you mean. Thanks about the diversity, i didn't notice the scratchyness until it became mp3, is it supposed to be like that? ill work harder on the mastering.

thx again, ttyl.

-crepth

yar

Lol Im stupid, why didnt I do that in the first place? Oh and you dont suck at all! =D

This song is really experimental! Spacy Experimental. I didnt really expect anything like this. You used some really cool sounds, it all fits together great. The robotic voice in the background makes it complete. This would be awesome for flash.
OR: 10, yesir, Ive heard experimental stuff of yours, but this is just a tad more experimental, and I love this one best of those so far(:
DI: 9, A nice little loop!
CL: 9, Clean^-^
EF: 8, Great work! Awesome work on the samples!
OV: 10, Thats amazingly experimental Rye (:

RyeGuyHead responds:

Had to do something different

cool!

Something the last reviewers must have missed were.. little bells in my opinion.. windchimes or Clockenspiel. Something like that would have made this song even better than it already is. I LOVE those pads.
OR: 10, This is the first time I hear a calm song like this with such great samples.
DI: 6, not alot of it, something needs to be added.
CL: 7, Could be me, but it doesnt sound too clear. Maybe I got fooled by the flanger.
EF: 7, Cant really tell how much effort went in here, but it sounds really cool.
OV: 7, If youre up for something really calming, listen to this. I really like this song^-^

yay for pico 07

lol I accidentally reviewed an old song of yoursO_o

Ok since your newest song wont seem to play for me Ill review this one. Great work on the drums, I love the phaser in there. The bass is really loud, maybe a little too. You set a really good mood in this song, its really playful. Lovely loop!
OR: 10, A Newgrounds based song, yes thats very cool!
DI: 10, yes you did it again!
CL: 8, maybe a BIT too much bass lol
EF: 9, Sweet job at setting the mood man!
OV: 9, W00T!!! ALL MY 5 R BELONG TO THIS!
lol

RyeGuyHead responds:

Bass must be strong like bull

DONT BE AFAID TO DOWNLOAD YEA YOU TOLD ME, it doesnt stream

I suck

Wow!

Starts of amazing like the last review said. Didnt give me shivers but its a great mood you set there. Then all of a sudden a rapper comes in. Strange at first yes, but the song isnt ruined or anything. I think the rapping sounds great and the music aswell! This is a great collection of songs! Im not really into the rapscene, but your stuff sounds amazing!
OR: 10, I havent heard music like yours on ng before, but maybe its because I never check the hiphopgenres.
DI: 10, Yes awesome!
CL: 10, I find it sound so profesional! Youre signed arent you?
EF: 10, Well thats what it sounds like either way.
OV: 10, Nothing to add, just amazing!

Lovely

The beginning sounds pretty basic, but once the transition gets there it sounds really good! I love how everything sounds so.. playful! Experimental.. the synths, the beats. Everything really^-^ It just never seems to stop either, great! Its also a bit childish at parts. Great work on that! And a great way to end this song
OR: 8, Bashing beats, bass and synths with a childish atmosphere. Reminds me of Kingbastard's old stuff.
DI: 10, great work on that!
CL: 8, not really much to say here.
EF: 10, Sounds like a great ammount of effort went in here!
OV: 9, A great song^-^

snoballandthmonyshot responds:

nice1,
a few hours worth of me and waga taking turns messing around with fruity poops, was fun.
;ped

Hello again

I see my last review made you angry and Im sorry for that. I write reviews only to give tips on how to do better, not to blam someones ass off. Maybe I should have written more about what was good about the song. In case my last review made you angry: Im sorry, that wasnt supposed to happen. I could hear that there was alot of work to get the sounds that way.

I didnt listen to this song but Ill give you full tens.

Syntrus responds:

heh thx

Nice song you got there

starts of with 8-bit sounds a loud bass. Interests me right away, very catchy! I see you want help on where to improve this song? Well.. You could change the bassline instead of adding new layers of melody. Or you could pitch up an octave. Add some background effects maybe, or give it some breakbeats. I think best would be to change chords though^-^
OR: 9, I dont recall hearing an 8-bit like song like this of yours.
DI: 7, Usually you work hard on this. There still was alot of diversity, but not in the way to keep it interesting. So.. I recommend adding new chords.
CL: 9, Some nice stuff for my speakers^-^
EF: 7, Good job, but I know you can do better
OV: 7, I hope youll finish this song, I really like it! =D

RyeGuyHead responds:

maybe ill turn it into a midi and reasonize it

I like it

Cool use of samples and build up, but while listening I got the feeling it was looping over and over. Great song although I had hoped for something more. A little repetitive too. But good though. Maybe its the drums, yes I think it is.
OR: 9, A song based on.. a saying.. XD
DI: 6, Great song, but even better with more diversity^-^
CL: 10, Yes, great clarity!
EF: 7, It sounds like you loop your melodies over and over and barely add anything to keep it interesting. Thats a pitty, I hope youll work on that^-^
OV: 7, I like it(:

Syntrus responds:

EF: 7, It sounds like you loop your melodies over and over and barely add anything to keep it interesting. Thats a pitty, I hope youll work on that^-^

Well what the fuck do you do make it so it has no consistancy? I bet you your one of those basterds who make a song with about a million variations random techno with no flow makes no sense to me and it took more effort then you think man. Thanks for the reiview. And all i have to say is this EXACTLY >:{

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