Score: 8

"I saw that anime not that long ago"

submission: Gunslinger Girl Berserk

date: May 30, 2008

I saw the anime not too long ago, so I decided reviewing this.

You have a nice drawing style and your animation is running smooth. Pretty nice. I see you recreated the very first scene of the anime. Its pretty well done, but maybe you should try out something different than the recreation of an animescene, something longer too. With your skills you can make something better than this. I am very impressed by the gore in this animation. The characters are kind of simple although you did a very well job on the girls' hair.

There are some things you could work on. For example, the main difference between this and the anime is, that in the anime I can tell what was going on. Everything in your animation is going so fast, its hard to tell what exactly is happening. It seems like random violence because you cut out the dialogs.

And you should have added music. If possible from the Gunslinger Girl soundtrack. Music gives animation more of a reason. Its much easier for te watcher to understand a scene that way, even without speech.

I would have enjoyed this movie better if it wasnt done in madness style, but I guess I have the anime for that :3
Youll get my 8, good job!

Score: 10

"@.@"

submission: Gone to Bel Air, brb.

date: May 22, 2008

That was awesome, I was expecting nothing like this! =D
I think this needs a seizure warning though :P

I can't describe this other than random. The music made me laugh, and the animation was just perfect. It was a very messy animation, but I wouldnt call it crappy at all. You sir have style, and a good sense of humour.

Score: 7

"Psycho"

submission: Reiko - S'no Fair

date: March 9, 2008

A very nice animation, the first one I'm watching. Very stylish with great work on the details of the characters. Also a nice use of colors, which sets a great horror theme.

Audio is something you could work on. To set a creepy theme the bells weren't so bad, but they got anoying quite fast. The laughing girl sounded looped, and the voice acting at the ending wasn't quite convincing to me. Maybe no speech at all would have been better. The sound effects were ok though. Some wind blowing softly in the background would have been nice.. Oh, and I really loved the voice at the beginning "Reikooooo". Together with the opening screen.. Now that's really horror like!

Details on the surroundings. The falling snow didn't look like snow but like big white blobs falling from the sky. The rest of the surroundings looked too simple along with the animation. I admit it looks stylish, but really.. It bothers me a little.

Animation. You gave the characters alot of detail, and this looks very nice. But it makes it a lot harder for you to create a smooth frame by frame movement. For example the movement of hair, it looks really choppy. It looks very stylish though. Except for the blood and snowsplashes, they weren't hard to draw but oddly animated. You might want to work on that.

Moodsetting. I guess this is supposed to be horror, but it did not really drag me in. It's more like a twisted kindergarten story gone psycho to me. I would love to see more tension :3

Score: 10

"Whaaa...? o.o"

submission: Rig - Moving On

date: June 11, 2008

This is just so stunningly good. Definitely my new favourite song of yours. Made with samples from fruityloops and with fruityloops only.. I have heard amazing fruityloops demo songs, but never anything coming close to being as good as this. Your mastering may not be as good as it normally is but DAMN. This song is freaking awesome. I cant wait till you get to completely mastering it! (:

You inspiring bastard harhar!
Hope you enjoy your 10 as much as I enjoyed this song :P

Score: 9

"I love this song :3"

submission: A Thousand Times

date: April 24, 2008

Congratulations on frontpage!

This song builds up beautifully, very well composed! The singing is awesome and clear. Very professional. It sets a very great mood. The solo sounded very cool and the ending is really powerfull!

I see people writing that something misses, and I agree. Its a bassline that misses. Also the panning you used on the guitarstrumming sounds a bit strange without anything to make it sound natural. Like a bassline :3

I really enjoyed this song! I hope you'll put up some lyrics in the comments^-^

Score: 8

"awesome? O_o yeah!"

submission: Rig - Stardust Backwards

date: February 21, 2008

Omg! Stop giving me all these satanic messages yuo bish! D:<

Wow, when you just linked me here, I thought it was a project just for the heck of it. But I listened, and heard these... FRIKIN awesome beats! I sure as hell enjoyed this alot. Though the whole reversed thing... Well I like it, just not a full song backwards lol.